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22 May 2008 @ 11:35 am
Disconnected  
days of fake smiles and lies
inside the child weeps
someone knows, someone cares
childish hopes turn to fear
older now, the truth comes out
no one knows
no one cares
eternities spin, collide. Never converge
chills the bones, freezes the blood
tonight, the promise of peace
ending the lie
dawn comes with fake lies and smiles
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the girl who used to dance on fire and brimstonewhiskyinmind on May 22nd, 2008 11:45 am (UTC)
it's another one of the emo poems that isn't a reflection of anything. It just... came.

Although the disconnected thing that was the root kinda was when I started writing. :)
bitterbird on May 22nd, 2008 11:44 am (UTC)
awwww thats beautiful and heartbreaking
the girl who used to dance on fire and brimstonewhiskyinmind on May 22nd, 2008 11:45 am (UTC)
*snugs*
Denita: Darla by elizalavellemenomegirl on May 22nd, 2008 03:26 pm (UTC)
Very-well written. I like this a lot. I know it's not really a Jossverse poem but do you mind if I include it on the Herald? It reminds me of virtually every female character in the 'verse.
the girl who used to dance on fire and brimstone: buffy//grad day - mewhiskyinmind on May 22nd, 2008 03:27 pm (UTC)
Wow - I'd be flattered if you would!

Thank you so much!
Denita: eliza27 by amerciangrl69menomegirl on May 22nd, 2008 03:28 pm (UTC)
You're very welcome and thank you.
velvetwhipvelvetwhip on May 22nd, 2008 05:53 pm (UTC)
Lovely work.


Gabrielle
the girl who used to dance on fire and brimstonewhiskyinmind on May 23rd, 2008 09:48 am (UTC)
Thank you sweetie!
still searching for something...: SGA - sheppard heartamy_star_ on May 23rd, 2008 09:43 am (UTC)
this is one of the best poems i've read in a long time. look, you made me lose my caps, even. :)
the girl who used to dance on fire and brimstonewhiskyinmind on May 23rd, 2008 09:48 am (UTC)
*blushes*

I'm glad you like it!